Our Angel (Part : 1)


This is the second Book of Mine Story.

“Hubby…” Manik was taking shower in the morning and he startled listening to Nandini’s screams from outside. He became worried.

“Baby, relax, I’m just coming.” She was yelling in pain continuously from outside and he was going crazy. He turned off the shower and wore his clothes immediately. He opening the door, walked outside.

“Hubby, It is paining a lot. Ahaaa, please do something fast.” She was sweating badly and shrieking in pain, holding her stomach.

Manik walked toward her. “Relax, baby , you will be fine.” He assured her, caressing her hair and kissed her forehead.

“Hubby, ahhaa.. , it’s paining aa… alot.” She cried in extreme pain, holding his shirt and he picked her up in his arms.

He took her outside, holding her in his arms. She was screaming in pain. “Ask Shankar to take out my car fast.” He yelled on a maid and she immediately ran to inform his driver, Shankar.

“Baby, you will be fine.” He was constantly assuring her and kissing all over her face. He couldn’t see his baby in pain. It was killing him from inside.

Abhi saw them and listening Nandini’s scream, he understood where Manik was taking her. “Manik, I’m also coming.” Abhi shouted from behind when Manik walked out from the mansion with Nandini.

Maid was standing, holding the door of car for them outside the mansion. He hastily made her sit inside and himself settled down with her.

As they settled down, driver started the car’s engine and drove off.

“Hubby, I think, chotu baby is finally going to come .” She smiled slightly in pain also thinking about their chotu baby.

“Yes, baby.” Manik smiled too , looking at her and kissed her forehead. His eyes were brimming with tears and his heart was beating so fast.


Nandini was on hospital bed and her legs wide open. She was trying hard to bring her chotu baby in this world. She was putting up her all energy.

“Yes, You can do this, baby , Come on..” Manik was constantly encouraging her, standing beside her in the Labour Room. His one hand was entwined with her and other hand was stroking her hair.

“Aaa….” she was trying to push out the baby, clutching the bed sheet and digging her nails in his hand. Manik was trying hard to be strong at this moment for her and their chotu baby. He never wanted to see his baby in so much pain.

“Hubby, I’m tired. I can’t..” she cried in pain, looking at Manik helplessly.

“You can, baby. You can, come on push. I’m with you.” He tried to give her strength.

“I have to bring our chotu baby in this world, I can do this.” She murmured to herself. She closed her eyes tightly and screamed loudly, putting up her all strength for the last time. Finally the baby came out. She sighed with relief, closing her eyes,. After hearing chotu baby’s cry, she fainted.

Manik was having tears in his eyes and a smile on his face, seeing his chotu baby for the first time. The baby was crying in low voice, moving her hands and legs in the arms of Doctor.

“It’s a baby girl.” Doctor told Manik after giving the baby to nurse for cleaning. Manik smiled contentedly and looked at Nandini.

“Baby..” He became worried for her and started waking her up while patting her cheeks.

“Relax, Mr. Malhotra. She will get her conscious back with in an hour.” Doctor told him, putting her hand over his shoulder from behind. Manik sighed deeply, closing his eyes.

“You made it, baby, I’m proud of you.” He whispered and kissed his wife’s forehead.

He turned around and asked from doctor “How is, my..” he was short of words.

“The baby is healthy, Mr. Malhotra.” Doctor put hand on his arms. “We are shifting Nandini to wardroom. You can meet your baby there.” Manik nodded his head.


As he walked outside of the Labour room , Cabir, Abhi and Navya, they started asking lots of questions from him. Mukti was at home with her son, she was taking care of him.

“It’s a baby girl.” Manik told them joyfully, having a smile on his face. They all congratulated him with the hug one by one.

“So, how are you feeling after becoming the daddy ?” Abhi asked teasingly.

“I…” he opened his mouth to speak something but he didn’t know, how to explain them that what he was feeling at that moment. He was feeling so blessed at that time. They all laughed on his condition.

“Now let me inform Mukti or else she would kill me.” Abhi said dramatically, taking out phone from his pocket and went in the corner to call Mukti.

“How is our Nandini?” Navya asked concernedly.

“She’s fine. Doctor has said that she will get back her conscious with in an hour.” Manik told them.

That time only, a nurse stepped outside, holding Manik’s little princess in her arms, she was wrapped in white sheet. She was sleeping peacefully. Manik got lost in her as his eyes fell on her. She was so beautiful and perfect.

When Nurse was giving the baby to Manik, he was clueless, how to hold her. He was afraid that he might fall her down because She was so tiny.

He cradled his princess tenderly in his arms and few tears dropped down from his eyes automatically. She recognised the touch of her father and smiled slightly in her sleep after coming into her father arms.

“She smiled..” Manik squeaked joyfully like a small baby, seeing her smile. It was the best moment of his life. She started crying with her eyes closed in his arms as he shouted.

“I’m sorry, I’m sorry.” He apologised from her and started placing kisses on her forehead. She instantly calmed down and stopped crying. Cabir and Navya were laughing with the nurse.

Manik again get lost in her. He was looking at her every feature so deeply, her tiny nose, her tiny potty lips, her red cheeks. He felt like he was holding the whole world in his arms.

“My Princess..” he whispered blissfully, touching his face with her face. He chuckled when she started licking his face after taking out her little tongue. He kissed her forehead, saying thank you to god for blessing him with the beautiful daughter. He even apologised from his princess because he was going to kill her in starting. She was in his arms and came into this world because of her mother only.

He fell in love with her at that moment. He had never thought that he would fall in love with somebody else except Nandini but his little princess proved him wrong by making him fall in love with her.

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Love Mehak

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69 thoughts on “Our Angel (Part : 1)

  1. Awesome concept… Superb.. So manik was going to kill the baby 1st!! Why?? 🤔 Hmm, dekhte hai aage iska kya jawab hai.. 🧐🧐

      1. Yeha na mujhe kuch samajh hi nhi aa rhi hai.. Har ek story alag alag nhi hai.. Saab ek sth hai.. Like ek k baad ek updates on different stories.. 😒😒😒😒

  2. So so amazing miku 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 after reading this seriously I am so emotional and happy at the same time Yaar ek ek word Yaar tune Aise Likha hain Jaise bilkul Maine manan ko samne dekh rahi hoon I am speechless I am

  3. Awesomee mindblowing update….
    Aww poor nandu ketne pain mai thi bt still she was happy as now her chotu baby was going to come in this world and also in labour room she was so tried and felt like she cant do anything more bt with manik being at her side n to bring chotu baby in the world she got the strength and delivered a healthy baby girl….
    Manik was so happy to finally hold his baby girl in his he first thought he will never anyone more than nandu bt as soon as he held his baby in his arms he loved her and even felt guilty as he had tried to kill her when he got to know abt nandu’s pregnancy….

  4. Was waiting for the chapter and was about to ask u when will u update.. thnk u for this beautiful update

  5. I am from kurdistan maybe you don’t know where is it but iam biggest fan of you writing its amazing 😘😍😍

  6. Amazing finally the cherry of the family came in this world waiting for the next part eagerly tytytytttttgyyyyyyyyssssssssssmmmmmmm @mehaklovely ❤❤❤❤❤❤💐💐💐

  7. Thisss iss sooooooo ooooohooo oooooo oooooo cuteeee yaar I feel in love 💕💕💕💕💕

  8. I love this.. this was my favourite one ❤️❤️ Finally manan got their baby ❤️😭can’t wait for upcoming chapters🙏🏻! Thank you for updating this. I have one more question when will you update the new story of yours.. the professor one. I’m waiting for that one too. Hope you will update both of them soon.

  9. Di di diiiiii …… U dont know how much i was waiting for this am so happy after getting the notification loved itttt…..
    I cant say it was like am there with thats what i felt when am reading it…..
    Loved the manik hold her and apologized to the baby …..yaarr di u are best at words seriously loved it……
    Lots of love .take care ….and thanks for the wonderful update ……..

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